new song
May 23rd, 2007 + 5:05 PM · silentslaughter
I kinda like these lyrics for
a new song what do you think?
VERSE:
he laughs and looks you in the eye
you grab a gun and begin to cry
everything seems too surreal
as the blood of life begins to spill
your time here flashes before your eyes
you look on as fire fills the skies
CHORUS:
cheating death is like a game
except now you feel the pain
and everyone sees your heart is torn
but from your pain only sorrow is born
you the battle's end, but the war wages on
and you find everyone left you know there gone
but still you get up, you fight through the night
until victory is in your sight!
THIS IS IT FOR NOW
a new song what do you think?
VERSE:
he laughs and looks you in the eye
you grab a gun and begin to cry
everything seems too surreal
as the blood of life begins to spill
your time here flashes before your eyes
you look on as fire fills the skies
CHORUS:
cheating death is like a game
except now you feel the pain
and everyone sees your heart is torn
but from your pain only sorrow is born
you the battle's end, but the war wages on
and you find everyone left you know there gone
but still you get up, you fight through the night
until victory is in your sight!
THIS IS IT FOR NOW
Comments (3) by Bee
May 24th, 2007 + 9:05 PM · Bee
i actually like this. it gives like an immage it's really cool tho. i think that it would make a good song, like with a whole band and everything
duuuuuuuuuuuude
June 9th, 2007 + 10:06 PM · xXxsaharaxXx
I f-ing love this song! It's got a lot to offer when you try and put it together for a band... I think you will do great!
Keep writting you're really good at it.
Much Love,
xXxsaharaxXx
Keep writting you're really good at it.
Much Love,
xXxsaharaxXx
July 1st, 2007 + 7:07 PM · Bee
i agree. that was awesome! in the beginning tho it made me think of Chicago when she shoots the guy. lol. i'd really like to hear it sometime so you should record it or something. it's really discriptive about how she felt.